Do you like to compose poems or short stories?  If yes, consider participating in the SSAI Literary Challenge.

Every entry gets a chance at winning a free provincial SSAI Membership (Value = $5.00) (One free membership per person per year.) (Only original submissions accepted.)

Submit your entry to info@saskseniors.com. In the subject line, write Literary Challenge. By submitting an entry, you give your permission for SSAI to include your entry on its website and/or to submit it to Gray Matters for publication.

SUMMER CHALLENGE:

“A SHORT, SHORT STORY” / “FLASH FICTION’
“MICROFICTION”

A short story is a work of prose fiction that can be read in one sitting—usually between 20 minutes to an hour.  While the average short story is 1,000 to 7,500 words, a piece of fiction shorter than 1,000 words is considered a “SHORT SHORT STORY” or “FLASH FICTION.”  Anything less than 300 words is called “MICROFICTION.”

Our summer literary challenge is to write a “short, short story” or a “microfiction.” Send them to Shannon at info@saskseniors.net.

Short stories come in all kinds of categories: action, adventure, biography, comedy, crime, detective, drama, dystopia, fable, fantasy, history, horror, mystery, philosophy, politics, romance, satire, science fiction, supernatural, thriller, tragedy, and Western. Here are some popular types of short stories, literary styles, and authors associated with them:

  • Fable: A tale that provides a moral lesson, often using animals, mythical creatures, forces of nature, or inanimate objects to come to life (Brothers Grimm, Aesop)
  • Flash fiction: A story between less than 1,000 words that lacks traditional plot structure or character development and is often characterized by a surprise or twist of fate (Lydia Davis)
  • Mini saga: A type of micro-fiction using exactly 50 words (!) to tell a story
  • Vignette: A descriptive scene or defining moment that does not contain a complete plot or narrative but reveals an important detail about a character or idea (Sandra Cisneros)
  • Modernism: Experimenting with narrative form, style, and chronology (inner monologues, stream of consciousness) to capture the experience of an individual (James Joyce, Virginia Woolf)
  • Postmodernism: Using fragmentation, paradox, or unreliable narrators to explore the relationship between the author, reader, and text (Donald Barthelme, Jorge Luis Borges)
  • Magical realism: Combining realistic narrative or setting with elements of surrealism, dreams, or fantasy (Gabriel García Márquez)
  • Minimalism: Writing characterized by brevity, straightforward language, and a lack of plot resolutions (Raymond Carver, Amy Hempel)
Fernie - by Lorraine Thibeualt

It was a dull, dreary day in Meadow Lake as Jacqui returned from her work at the church.  Jacqui’s mom was at work at the pharmacy.  Her dad was working at the forestry building or out in the field doing forestry work.

Jacqui’s cat, Midnight, had recently been put to sleep as his liver was failing, his teeth were loosening, he smelled badly, and he had little or no energy to eat or move.  It was a difficult decision – sad but necessary – as Midnight was suffering, and there was no hope of him getting better.  He had been the best of cats – a friend to snuggle up with, cry with, and play with – for 17½ years.  Jacqui remembered when he was so tiny he fit in the palm of her hand when he curled up.  She really missed him.  She missed his young antics knocking down the Christmas tree and bashing the ornaments as well as his adult laziness and warmth.  She wasn’t ready for another cat, not yet.  She still remembered holding Midnight as he received the dose of medicine that would stop his heart. She remembered him looking at her trustfully, and she cried.

On this dull day, several months after Midnight died, she came up the sidewalk towards her front door.  She heard a bird chirping quietly amongst the ferns that graced the garden just in front of the living room window.  As she approached, she expected the bird to fly away.  She couldn’t see it, but she could hear it, and it was chirping more now, and it definitely was not flying away.  Jacqui started searching amongst the ferns preparing herself for a bird to fly up in her face and scare her.

Instead, as she parted a few fern stalks, she saw the tiniest black and white kitten chirping – well mewling, I guess.  Jacqui fell in love immediately.  The kitten was so small and looked up at her with its kitten eyes and scratched up face.  It let her pick it up and cradle it.  “Poor thing,” she thought as she adjusted her purse and bags and carried the wee thing up the stairs and into the house.

Since Jacqui had already fallen in love with the kitten, she knew that she couldn’t put it back or give it to the humane society.  She had to find a way to keep it.  The problem was that her dad HATED cats.  He had given in when she got Midnight, but that was to be the end of it.  When Midnight passed, there were to be NO MORE CATS!

She called her mom at the pharmacy and told her what she had found and asked what she should do.  Now, unlike Dad, Mom was a cat lover who would join her daughter in any conspiracy to have a cat in the house again.  She told Jacqui to look after the cat until she got home which would be an hour before her husband got home from work.

When Mom got home, she and Jacqui brainstormed all the possible ways that they could convince Dad to let Jacqui keep the cat.  There weren’t any mice around, so they couldn’t use that as a reason.  Pleading and begging were the top solutions, but even those probably wouldn’t work.  As Dad’s truck came up the driveway, Mom suggested that they leave the kitten on a blanket on the sofa in full sight of Dad.  The pleading would start when he actually noticed the kitten.  The kitten, having been fed, curled up on the blanket and went to sleep.

Well, as it happened, Dad did not even notice the kitten.  To his credit, the kitten was still very tiny and looked like a piece of black and white fabric.  Finally, Jacqui said to her dad, “Look what I found among the ferns.”  She told him how she found the cat and what she thought had happened.  “I think someone threw it out of a car and it got all scraped.  It probably hid in the ferns for protection.”

“You can’t keep it!” said Dad sternly.  Oh! The sad face and the pleading that took place was a sight to behold.  The dramatics in Jacqui were at their highest level.  Even Mom got into the act.  Mom’s pleading had no effect, but the pleading of Daddy’s little girl who was now an adult (but would always remain Daddy’s little girl) won the day.

Fernie, the newly found kitten, became a beloved member of the household; well beloved to Jacqui and Mom.  He still is beloved to this day – 9 years after Jacqui found him amongst the ferns.  Of course, Dad didn’t want anything to do with him, but the kitten knew what to do to win over a dissenter.  He would walk past Dad and rub his legs.  Dad would say, “Get away from me!” and would give the kitten a gentle push with his foot.  Fernie would look up at Dad with eyes that said, “Pick me up, please.”  Dad never did pick Fernie up, but he gave in to the leg rubs and stopped pushing Fernie away.  Fernie would jump on the sofa getting ready to settle on Dad’s lap. Dad would say, “Don’t even think about it”, and Fernie would hop down from the sofa or settle down right beside Dad.

Now Dad is gone and Fernie is still here making life enjoyable for Jacqui and Mom and a new cat, Lune (another cat left behind by someone.)  This happy foursome continues to live together.  The policy that keeps everything peaceful is “The cats rule the household, and the humans are allowed to live there.”

Moving On - A Fable By Kathy Morrell

The fable, Moving On, is based on the arrival of Tundra Swans at the ponds of the Patience Lake Potash Mine. These are the facts on which the story is based.

  • The Tundra Swans were first spotted at Patience Lake on Mother’s Day 2003.
  • Their usual breeding ground is the tundra of northern Canada.
  • 2007 was the first year some of their young migrated south with the adults.
  • An adult Tundra Swan is quite a formidable opponent and a pair can usually fend off most predators.

 

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Moving On

 

          One spring, two Canada Geese set up housekeeping on one of the fresh water ponds at Patience Lake Potash Mine.  It was a lovely place to raise a family. There was abundant vegetation along the edge of the pond and there was even an island on which to build a nest safe from the coyotes and raccoons.  For company, there were other ducks and birds – the Mallards with their green heads, the Avocets with their curly upturned bills, and a number of Canada Geese families. 

One day in late April, a two-legged non-bird type came sneaking close to the shoreline.  Mother Goose turned her head to stare down the intruder. The human being seemed harmless enough even though he was carrying that peculiar object he held up to one eye – an object with a long cylindrical piece that moved slowly out and back again and then made a clicking sound.

“Oh well, it wasn’t a shotgun blast,” Mother Goose decided and went back to gathering dry grasses for the nest she was building a short distance from the shore.   

Late the next afternoon, she saw the arrival of two large white birds with long black legs and feet.  They circled the pond as if surveying their domain and came to a landing in the water just a short distance from the island.

Now what can they want? thought Mother Goose.  They act as if they own the place and we were here first. 

From the edge of the pond, Mother Goose then heard the clicks from the peculiar eyepiece objects. She craned her long neck forward to have another look.  Those long cylindrical things, usually pointed in her direction, were aimed this time at the intruders as if they were worthy of all the attention.  Mother Goose hissed in derision and then deciding that the pond world was big enough for everyone. went back to building her nest. 

          The next day, Mother Goose set off on a short flight to the adjacent pond to visit her good friend Gertrude Goose. 

          “What do you know about those two?” Mother Goose asked.

          “Well,” said her older and wiser friend.  “They’re called Tundra Swans. Usually, they set up house further north. That’s why the two-legged species get so excited. They’re not usually here.”

          “What’s with the clicking?”

          “Oh yes, that eyepiece is a camera,” Gertrude explained. “Perhaps, you’d like to move to our pond, Swans may look beautiful but they can be vicious, too.”

          “No,” Mother Goose replied.  “We’ve nearly finished out nest now.  And besides, Papa Goose thinks he can take on anything.” 

          And with that, Mother Goose lifted off the water and made her way back to her own island.

          The next day, she settled in on the nest and over the next week or so, she laid six eggs.  Papa Goose strutted the shoreline as if he’d accomplished something of tremendous import and the two waited for the day the eggs would hatch.

          Meanwhile on the other end of the little island, the two Tundra Swans were also preparing their nest and peering with hostility as the geese settled in for gosling rearing. A few days later, the swans, too, had a clutch of eggs to care for.  And the hostility spilled over into attack. 

          Eventually, six little goslings appeared in the nest and the battle intensified – daily dive attacks and constant harassment. Mother Goose and Papa Goose became more anxious as the goslings readied to leave the nest for the wider world of the pond.  What would become of their little ones?  What would the bullies of the pond do next?

          Two days later, the little goslings struggled down to the water and sailed away happily to bask in the sun.  Mother Goose and Papa Goose kept careful watch and for a few days, all went well, at least until the arrival of the six cygnets in the nest of the Tundra Swans. Protective of their young, the swans became even more vicious in their attacks on the Goose family.

          One day it happened.  The male swan attacked one of the goslings and killed it.  Mother Goose and Papa Goose screamed out their grief and then took action. The two parents moved their five remaining goslings to the waters of their friend Gertrude. The Tundra Swans had the pond to themselves.

          That summer the swans lost one of their six cygnets to a coyote and another in the tall grass.  As fall approached, the swans, two adults and their four young, prepared for the long migration south.

The following spring, Mother Goose once again spied the two-legged non-bird species with their cameras.  She knew they were waiting for the Tundra Swans who were likely to return to the world of the pond.  But this year, Mother Goose was wiser. She had decided to move to a new place with her good friend Gertrude.  She would leave the pond to the Tundra Swans and of course, the human beings with their clicking cameras. 

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          The moral of the story: Pay attention when life dictates that it is time to move on.

 

The Light Show - by Janet Hainstock

What was that?

 

A bright light shone in my eyes.

 

Just as quickly it was gone!

 

But then it happened again.

 

I squinted as I looked toward the light.

 

There hanging on a tree branch was a red stone swinging back and forth from a golden chain.

 

The light that shot out of it streaked toward another chain holding an orange-coloured stone that was

 

perched on a nearby branch.

 

As it leapt out of that stone, the light pointed toward a shiny yellow stone strung on

 

another branch.

 

Then it jumped toward a green stone that I mistook for a leaf.

 

The light continued to dance between many different shades of blue gem stones shimmering   

 

through the swaying tree branches.

 

The red light winked at me as it streaked toward another orange-coloured rock that only held the light for

 

a moment before it raced toward a dangling golden yellow stone on yet another tree branch.

 

I lay down on the grass and looked up.

 

I could see hundreds of necklaces hanging on hundreds of tree branches.

 

The light of the sun was dazzling as it danced from red to orange to yellow, then to green, blue, indigo,

 

and violet- coloured stones dangling from necklaces looped over branches.

 

The light had become a rippling, moving rainbow that created a song among the birds.

 

They fluttered their wings and twitched their tails as they became part of the shimmering light that

 

danced and dashed from tree branch to tree branch.

 

I slowly closed my eyes and simply listened to their delight as their singing flowed with the moving light.

 

My heart thump thumped in time with the birds’ song.

 

 As I lay on the soft, green grass with my eyes closed, I slept beneath the cover of light.

 

A history article - by Delwyn J.J. Jansen

In the latter part of the 1800s and the early portion of the 1900s the Dominion of Canada was advertising in the world for homesteaders.  My paternal grandfather and his siblings were residing in Hammond, Indiana, United States of America.  My paternal grandfather Gerhard Jansen was the only one of his siblings not married.  Viewing the advertisements and conversing with some friends he finally got an agreement with Adam Hufnagel in 1902 that they would travel to western Canada after Easter in 1903 to have a look. 

Easter 1903 was in mid April and after that Gerhard and Adam left Hammond and travelled north to Toronto, Ontario.  In Toronto they boarded the westward bound train for Regina, District of Assiniboia in the Northwest Territories.  Arriving in Regina they boarded the north bound train for Rosthern, District of Saskatchewan.

Adam and Gerhard upon arriving in Rosthern began talking to various people in the community to decide upon which direction they would travel to view lands. 

One of those days in Rosthern Gerhard sees a person he knows.  Pointing to that person he points to and states to Adam: “Hey, I know that guy. He’s Mathias Bartholet.  My parents rented his land at Wein, Missouri in 1899.” Gerhard approaches Mathias and states: “Hi Matt, what are you doing here?”.  Matt replies: “I am going to my homestead five miles north of Saint Peter’s Monastery.  What are you doing here?”

Gerhard states to Mathias: “Adam and I are here and are going to look for homestead lands.” Mathias states to Gerhard: “You’re looking for homestead lands! Just wait a minute I am going to cancel my homestead and go with you two.” Gerhard asks Mathias: “Why?” Mathias states to Gerhard: “I am going to homestead with you two as I know you and I do NOT know any of my homestead neighbors.”

Adam, Gerhard and Mathias began travelling together south and east of Rosthern.  They eventually ended up west of the Quill Lakes and each one selected a quarter.

Gerhard began building a soddie on the Northeast of 10-35-19-W2.  Mathias chose the Northwest of 12-35-19-W2 and Adam chose the northeast of 16-35-19-W2.  A few feet north of Gerhard and Mathias’s lands is the 52nd degree Latitude.  Over the years I have been told that the 52nd degree Latitude was the boundry between the District of Assiniboia and the District of Saskatchewan.

While Gerhard was building his soddie The Dominion Survey crew headed by Mr. Martin arrived and asked Gerhard if his crew could camp beside him while they were resurveying the township 35-19.  Gerhard told Mr. Martin yes.  As Mr. Martin’s crew were nearing their completion of resurveying Mr. Martin asked Gerhard: “What be your name sir?” Gerhard replied: “Gerhard Jansen. Why do you ask?”  Mr. Martin replies to Gerhard: “Mr. Warren who resurveyed this township last year put his name on the lake to the southwest of here calling it Warren Lake.  That is illegal to put your name or any of your crew’s name on anything.  I am going to rename that lake Jansen Lake in thanks for your hospitality.” That is how Jansen Lake was named.  

In the early 2000s BHP began doing surveying for potash.  Upon completing their surveying they decided the site about two miles southeast of Jansen Lake was where they would build a mine site.  After considerations they decided to call the mine site the Jansen mine site as it was near the lake.  With the aid of BHP a plack was erected near the Jansen Lake. 

SPRING CHALLENGE:

Write a HAIKU poem and submit it to SSAI [info@saskseniors.com] by April 30, 2025 for a chance to win a free SSAI membership.

A Haiku is a simple poem which originated in the 17th century in Japan.  Although they usually refer to nature, the only real rule applies to the number of syllables in each line, so you can let your imagination run wild with this one.

Haiku Characteristics and Rules

  • 3 lines
  • Line 1 contains 5 syllables
  • Line 2 contains 7 syllables
  • Line 3 contains 5 syllables

Here’s an example of a Haiku

Warm fresh scented air,
alive with springtime’s essence,
hail summer’s approach.

Bird flight fills the air
Welcome raindrops everywhere
At least spring is here.

— Elsie Carrick, Moose Jaw

an April snowstorm
reaching past runners and flats
for her winter boots

— Marion Young, Regina

FEBRUARY CHALLENGE:Write an ACROSTIC using the word FEBRUARY.

An acrostic poem is a poem where the first letter of each line spells out a word, phrase, or name. The word or phrase that is spelled out is usually the theme or message of the poem. Most often, it’s the first letter of each line that spells out the word, but they can be placed anywhere on the line. When they’re placed elsewhere in the line, it forms a kind of hidden ‘code’.

Example: Here is an acrostic poem using the word CATS.

Cuddly

Acrobatic

Tenacious and terrifying

Softly purring

F – Fierce winds blow

E – Excited children build snowmen

B – Bundle up in the cold

R – Repeat ‘B’ above

U – Unpredictable weather

A – Ardent skiers rejoice

R – Rev up your snowmobile

Y – Youthful glow on our faces

F – Family Day

E – Earmuffs

B – Black ice

R – Retreat

U – Unpredictable

A – Antifreeze

R – Radiant

Y – Youthful glow

JANUARY CHALLENGE:Write a LIMERICK using the name of your community.

A limerick is a short, five-line poem with a strict rhyme scheme and a bouncy rhythm. The rhyme scheme is AABBA, with the first two lines rhyming, the third and fourth rhyming, and the fifth line rhyming with or repeating the first line. Limericks are often humorous, nonsensical, or lewd, and are known for being easy to memorize. The word “limerick” is thought to refer to an old tune called “Won’t You Come to Limerick?” that had a similar rhyme scheme and meter.

Example: There was a young schoolboy of Rye,

Who was baked by mistake in a pie.

To his mother’s disgust,

He emerged through the crust,

And exclaimed, with a yawn, “Where am I?”

There once was a town called Shellbrook

Where everyone reads a good book

Their knowledge is sweet

Quite an intellectual feat

Bring a book when you come to Shellbrook.

In Shellbrook, there once was a crook

Who gave away all that he took

To the poor and the lame

She was a woman of fame

That generous crook of Shellbrook.

In the quaint little town of Shellbrook

The people wished for a Chinook

Well, it came and it warmed

The whole town was harmed

It’s no longer Shellbrook, it’s just Brook.

In Shellbrook, there once was a man

Who always said, “Yes, I can!”

When they told him he couldn’t

And repeated he shouldn’t

He yelled at them, “Yes, I can!”

Limericks by Linda Ard, Meota, SK

I regret, when I pick up a paper,

The print I can no longer decipher:

A magnifying glass

Doesn’t lend one much class

So I guess I’ll just have to suffer.

The snow sure piles up when you shovel.

Pretty soon, to your eyes it is level;

But a man, with his blower,

Makes it very much lower,

And you wonder just what was the trouble.

(This poem is dedicated to Eric.)

There was an old gal in Meota

Who couldn’t afford a Kubota

So, she shovelled the snow

In piles ready to go

Called on others for help when she had-ta.